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The maps depicts how the dock of Liverton has altered since 1980 until now.

The maps depicts how the dock of Liverton has altered since 1980 until now. LlyX1
The maps depicts how the dock of Liverton has altered since 1980 until now. Overall, it is clear that Liverton has transformed considerably its function from a dock into a residental and heritage areas. Moreover, Liverton has urbanized with the emergence of the top-notch educational and entertaining amenities. To the north of river, the warehouses located on the west and east has been demolished relative to the construction of educational centre and a kid’s playing area. In addition, the nearby crane has been substituted by a sailing club To the south of river, while the cane and ware house have been converted into a hotel and apartments, there was the appearances of a parking near there and a river walk along the river / there was an appearance of a parking near there. Besides, at the present, along the river witnessed a construction of a river walk In the river, there are many ships that have removed and only one is kept as a museum. On the east side, a bridge was built to connect the two sides of the river with the addition of a flood barier to the coast to protect the area.
The maps
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how the dock of
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Liverton
has altered since 1980 until
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now
.
Overall
, it is
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clear
that
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Liverton
has transformed
considerably
its function from a dock into a
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residental
and heritage areas.
Moreover
,
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Liverton
has urbanized with the emergence of the top-notch educational and entertaining amenities.

To the north of
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river
, the warehouses located on the west and east has
been demolished
relative to the construction of educational
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centre
and a kid’s playing area.
In addition
, the nearby crane has
been substituted
by a sailing
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club


To the south of
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river
, while the cane and ware
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house
have
been converted
into a hotel and apartments,
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there was the appearances
of a parking near there and a
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river
walk along the
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river
/ there was an appearance of a parking near there.
Besides
, at the present, along the
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river
witnessed a construction of a
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river
walk

In the
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river
, there are
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many
ships that have removed and
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only
one is
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kept
as a museum. On the east side, a bridge
was built
to connect the two sides of the
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river
with the addition of a flood
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barier
to the coast to protect the area.
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