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The maps depict modifications made to an unspecified cinema from 1980 to the present day.

The maps depict modifications made to an unspecified cinema from 1980 to the present day. 75lK5
The maps depict modifications made to an unspecified cinema from 1980 to the present day. Overall, the cinema underwent extensive renovations, with the addition of more cinemas and various other amenities to the left-hand and right-hand sides. In 1980, the cinema was largely vacant with only two cinemas, the first of which was sited to the immediate left of the entrance, the second of which was positioned to the relatively unoccupied right-hand side. Over the next 40 years, this part of the cinema was filled with three additional cinemas, with the original Cinema 1 and 2 relocated to the left-hand side. Other major changes include the addition of facilities that cater for the various needs of moviegoers. An area in which food and drink are served and a room for relaxation are established, taking up the space where there was once Cinema 1. Additionally, the old drink stall in the right corner near the entrance was converted into a DVD shop. The parts that are left unchanged include the toilet (now sited between Cinema 1 and 2) and the ticket box office to the left of the entrance.
The maps depict modifications made to an unspecified
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cinema
from 1980 to the present day.
Overall
, the
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cinema
underwent extensive renovations, with the addition of more
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cinemas
and various other amenities to the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
-hand and right-hand sides.

In 1980, the
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cinema
was
largely
vacant with
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only
two
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cinemas
, the
first
of which
was sited
to the immediate
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left
of the entrance, the second of which
was positioned
to the
relatively
unoccupied right-hand side. Over the
next
40 years, this part of the
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cinema
was filled
with three additional
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cinemas
, with the original
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Cinema
1 and 2 relocated to the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
-hand side.

Other major
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
include the addition of facilities that cater for the various needs of moviegoers. An area in which food and drink
are served
and a room for relaxation
are established
, taking up the space where there was once
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Cinema
1.
Additionally
, the
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old
drink stall in the right corner near the entrance
was converted
into a DVD shop. The parts that are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
unchanged include the toilet (
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now
sited between
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Cinema
1 and 2) and the ticket box office to the
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left
of the entrance.
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IELTS academic The maps depict modifications made to an unspecified cinema from 1980 to the present day.

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