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The assigned bar graph depicts the sales of various modern games internationally during 2000 and 2005.

The assigned bar graph depicts the sales of various modern games internationally during 2000 and 2005. Q2oBx

Looking at the bar graph, purchase of handhold games was at the peak in every year among others in 2003 and 2004 it was sold at almost $16 billion. However, in other remaining years these games sold about 12 billion dollars. The sales of console games was below 6 billion dollars during 6year period which was almost half than that of hand hold games. In case of online play, sales begin in 2001 and inclined by 2 billion each year and reached the peak of 12 billion which was 11 Times more than beginning period. Further more, mobile phone games were purchased by masses only in last these years by sending 4, 6 and 8 billion dollars globally in 2003, 2004 and 2005 respectively. Overall, it is manifest that sales of handhold games was maximum while, online games were purchased half than handhold games, throughout the period.

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 which was 11 Times more than beginning period. Further
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billion
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.

Overall
, it is manifest that sales of handhold You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplaysportbusiness
games
 was maximum while, online You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplaysportbusiness
games
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purchased
 half than handhold You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplaysportbusiness
games
, throughout the period. 