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The maps compare the outlook of a town which is Islip, with the expected changes that are predicted to happen in future for the development of the area.

The maps compare the outlook of a town which is Islip, with the expected changes that are predicted to happen in future for the development of the area. y7aNg
As per planned area of countryside will take place the vital roads slip will ban the entry of vehicles to the middle of the town and the road will be declared have footpath. A large number shopping centre is expected to cover a maximum area at Central north quite equal in the amount of space for bus terminal and a vehicle parking at both sides of it with the help of an enroching the park area. New housing will be developed. Surprisingly, the main road wood same as it is now throughout the entire development.
As per planned area of countryside will take place the vital roads slip will ban the entry of vehicles to the middle of the town and the road will
be declared
have footpath. A large number shopping
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.
centre
is
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expected
to cover a maximum area at Central north quite equal in the amount of space for bus terminal and a vehicle parking at both sides of it with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
of an
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enroching
the park area. New housing will
be developed
.
Surprisingly
, the main road wood same as it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
throughout the entire development.
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IELTS academic The maps compare the outlook of a town which is Islip, with the expected changes that are predicted to happen in future for the development of the area.

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