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The maps compare the changes of an airport as a result of the future redevelopment that will happen one year later.

The maps compare the changes of an airport as a result of the future redevelopment that will happen one year later. 30Mnd
The maps compare the changes of an airport as a result of the future redevelopment that will happen one year later. It is clear that there are more facilities constructed for people's needs and more gates are in operation. Looking at the first part of the airport where people enter after arriving in the airport, the entrance for departures and arrivals will be built twice as there are now. In the leaving-guests room, the old Check-in area will be moved in the right corner where the old cafeteria was and replaced by a whole new Bag drop one. Also, the cafeteria will be replaced right next on the left of the entrance, in front of the Bag drop area. Next is the coming-guests place. To the right of the entryway, a space for cars will be constructed for a new service called hiring cars that is going to be activated after the renovation. Furthermore, an ATM and a cafeteria are also being erected on the right of the room, respectively. For the rest of the airport, keeping the two original for Passport control, extending the surface and operating more gates are parts of the improvement. In detail, patrons can go shopping during the waiting time after leaving the Security passport control in modern shops generated next year. As the space will be expanded to a Y-shaped, so that a sky train will work at the center in order to take the passengers to the destination quickly. Finally, the total of 18 gates entering the airplanes are being placed around the Y-shaped.
The maps compare the
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changes
of an
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airport
as a result
of the future redevelopment that will happen one year later.

It is
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clear
that there are more facilities constructed for
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people
's needs and more gates are in operation.

Looking at the
first
part of the
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airport
where
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people
enter after arriving in the
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airport
, the entrance for departures and arrivals will
be built
twice as there are
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now
. In the leaving-guests room, the
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old
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Check
-in area will be
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moved
in the
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right
corner where the
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old
cafeteria was and replaced by a whole new Bag drop one.
Also
, the cafeteria will
be replaced
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right
next
on the
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left
of the entrance, in front of the Bag drop area.
Next
is the coming-guests place. To the
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right
of the entryway, a space for cars will
be constructed
for a new service called hiring cars
that is
going to
be activated
after the renovation.
Furthermore
, an ATM and a cafeteria are
also
being erected
on the
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right
of the room,
respectively
.

For the rest of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
airport
, keeping the two original for Passport control, extending the surface and operating more gates are parts of the improvement. In detail, patrons can go shopping during the waiting time after leaving the Security passport control in modern shops generated
next
year. As the space will
be expanded
to a Y-shaped,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
that a sky train will work at the center in order to take the passengers to the destination
quickly
.
Finally
, the total of 18 gates entering the airplanes are
being placed
around the Y-shaped.
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IELTS academic The maps compare the changes of an airport as a result of the future redevelopment that will happen one year later.

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