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The diagrame below shows the structure of a home smokery abd how ut works?

The diagrame below shows the structure of a home smokery abd how ut works? 2K6EX

The diagram demonstrates the pattern of something which is known as home smokery and the procedure regarding the work is done by it and it is followed by three different stages. It is clear that the machine has three parts. In the first part, there is a large underground section, which is empty and there is not only lid on the top but also air goes through it in the second section. Afterwards, in the next section, it is similar to the previous one but it has lid on the top side and there are some logs in the section, when smoke is generated through fire, it is gone into three sections through narrow pipe. It is appearnt from the rest of the details, it is extremely spacious as well as it is on ground level. Then, the food which anyone want to cook is taken place in it and with the help of smoke, it is about to cook. Overall, all the steps are essential to built the home smokery and for working. If one step is missed, whole the procedure would be halted.

The diagram demonstrates the pattern of something which is known
 as home Possible spelling mistake found.smokersSmokeysmokersmokeysmoker y
smokery
 and the procedure regarding the work is done
 by it and it is followed
 by three This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 stages.

It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that the machine has three parts. In the first
 part, there is a large underground You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcategorysectorzonedistrictarearegion
section
, which is empty and there is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 lid on the top This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
also
 air goes through it in the second You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcategorysectorzonedistrictarearegion
section
. Afterwards, in the next
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcategorysectorzonedistrictarearegion
section
, it is similar to the previous one This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it has lid on the top side and there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 logs in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcategorysectorzonedistrictarearegion
section
, when smoke is generated
 through fire, it is gone
 into three You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcategorysectorzonedistrictarearegion
sections
 through narrow pipe. It is Possible spelling mistake found.apparent
appearnt
 from the rest of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
, it is extremely
 spacious as well
 as it is on ground level. Then, the food which anyone The pronoun 'anyone' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "wants", "wanted".wantswanted
want
 to cook is taken
 place in it and with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of smoke, it is about to cook.

Overall
, all the steps are essential Did you mean "to build"?to build
to built
 the home Possible spelling mistake found.smokersSmokeysmokersmokeysmoker y
smokery
 and for working. If one step is missed
, whole the procedure would be halted
. 