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how many vehicles were registered in 5 various types in Australia in 4 years period from 2010 to 2014.

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The table illustrates how many vehicles were registered in 5 various types in Australia in 4 years period from 2010 to 2014. Overall, there was an increase in five different types, with passenger vehicles witnessing the most dramatic rise. In addition, the number of the passenger vehicles is the highest figures over the time. The number of passenger vehicles were registered started at 11, 800, 000, after which it experienced a rise to 12, 700, 000 in 2012, before ending the period at 13, 000, 000. While, the figure for the commercial vehicles was at 2, 300, 000, followed by a slow increase to 2, 700, 000. 540, 000 motocycles were registered in 2010, with a subsequent increase to 680, 000 in 2012 and a final at 709, 000, which is the largest change in 5 different types with 30. 8%, nearly triple the figure of passenger vehicles, 10. 2%. Similar changes can be seen in the figure for heavy trucks and light trucks, which 8. 3% and 23. 5% respectively.
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IELTS academic how many vehicles were registered in 5 various types in Australia in 4 years period from 2010 to 2014.

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