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A lot of administrative work is done after the IELTS test. Below is a chart of what happens to the candidate's ielts test after the test has been completed.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.You should write at least 150 words

A lot of administrative work is done after the IELTS test. Below is a chart of what happens to the candidate's ielts test after the test has been completed. PLM12
The provided process demonstrates the information that how numerous steps of administrative work is considered to make final certificate after giving ielts exam by candidates. Overall, it is a lucid that this process is divided into three stages, starting with reading and listening collected, and ends with a certificate mail to candidate. Initially, it can be observed that in the first step, reading and listening tests are collected to check candidate's answer sheets, then it is marked by the examiner, after that scores of test is dispatch to administrator office. Similarly, in terms of speaking, accessor observe test after collecting that is the categorized into two parts between interview tape and marks. Thus, interview tape of interviewer is stored in order to reassess that is moved to examination board along with final marks. Further scrutinizing, by giving writing test is collected in term of marking the test and inspector provides marks. Besides that, writing answer paper is forward to examination board for storing and it can recheck again. In the next step, all marks are collected of four modules by administrators for making out candidate's certificate. Finally, the prepared certificate transfer to candidate.
The provided process demonstrates the information that how numerous steps of administrative work
is considered
to
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make
final
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certificate
after giving
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ielts
exam by candidates.

Overall
, it is a lucid that this process
is divided
into three stages, starting with reading and listening collected, and ends with a
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certificate
mail to candidate.

Initially
, it can
be observed
that in the
first
step, reading and listening
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tests
are collected
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
candidate's answer sheets, then it
is marked
by the examiner, after that scores of
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test
is dispatch to administrator office.
Similarly
, in terms of speaking,
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accessor
observe
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test
after collecting
that is
the categorized into two parts between interview tape and marks.
Thus
, interview tape of interviewer
is stored
in order to reassess
that is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moved
to examination board along with final marks.

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Further
scrutinizing, by giving writing
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test
is collected
in term of marking the
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test
and inspector provides marks.
Besides
that, writing answer paper is forward to examination board for storing and it can recheck again. In the
next
step, all marks
are collected
of four modules by administrators for making out candidate's
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
certificate
.
Finally
, the prepared
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
certificate
transfer to candidate.
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IELTS academic A lot of administrative work is done after the IELTS test. Below is a chart of what happens to the candidate's ielts test after the test has been completed.

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