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The maps compare some changes over the period 1950 to nowadays.

The maps compare some changes over the period 1950 to nowadays. 0J8O
Mainly we can notice the quantity of people has increased and in addition to this, there is a lake. Firstly, beginning with territory where local people live has grown about six times and both sides of river have been resided. On the other hand, riverbed has been dug and enhanced consequently, as a result lake has been created across the city and a dam was constructed at the end of lake. Business area has been grown and is placed each flank of river and combined by a bridge, while another one get together living places which is located at the end of new road constructed on the other side of river. Speaking of transport, furthermore airport settle in the same place but it is larger now. There is two government instead of one which has been locating by the bridge in the business land, new and bigger one has builted next to the road intersection.
Mainly
we can notice the quantity of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
has increased and
in addition
to this, there is a lake.

Firstly
, beginning with territory where local
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
has grown about six times and both sides of river have
been resided
.
On the other hand
, riverbed has
been dug
and enhanced
consequently
,
as a result
lake has
been created
across the city and a dam
was constructed
at the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of lake.

Business area has
been grown
and
is placed
each flank of river and combined by a bridge, while another one
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
together living places which
is located
at the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of new road constructed on the other side of river. Speaking of transport,
furthermore
airport settle in the same place
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but
it is larger
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
.

There is two
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
instead
of one which has been locating by the bridge in the business land, new and bigger one has
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builted
next
to the road intersection.
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IELTS academic The maps compare some changes over the period 1950 to nowadays.

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