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The maps compare some changes over the period 1950 to nowadays.

The maps compare some changes over the period 1950 to nowadays. 0J8O

Mainly we can notice the quantity of people has increased and in addition to this, there is a lake. Firstly, beginning with territory where local people live has grown about six times and both sides of river have been resided. On the other hand, riverbed has been dug and enhanced consequently, as a result lake has been created across the city and a dam was constructed at the end of lake. Business area has been grown and is placed each flank of river and combined by a bridge, while another one get together living places which is located at the end of new road constructed on the other side of river. Speaking of transport, furthermore airport settle in the same place but it is larger now. There is two government instead of one which has been locating by the bridge in the business land, new and bigger one has builted next to the road intersection.

Mainly
 we can notice the quantity of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 has increased and in addition
 to this, there is a lake.

Firstly
, beginning with territory where local This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 has grown about six times and both sides of river have been resided
. On the other hand
, riverbed has been dug
 and enhanced consequently
, as a result
 lake has been created
 across the city and a dam was constructed
 at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of lake.

Business area has been grown
 and is placed
 each flank of river and combined by a bridge, while another one This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 together living places which is located
 at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of new road constructed on the other side of river. Speaking of transport, furthermore
 airport settle in the same place This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it is larger This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
.

There is two This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
instead
 of one which has been locating by the bridge in the business land, new and bigger one has Possible spelling mistake found.boostedquilted
builted
next
 to the road intersection. 