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The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. rVo6
The graph illustrates the number of passengers commuting by the Underground station in London. Overall, the timing of 8. 00 am and 18. 00 pm are considered to be the peak hours because 400 people use this passage in the morning and around 390 use it in the evening. Very few commuters (about 100) use the Underground station early morning at 6 p. m. which is also followed in the evening at 16. 00 p. m. There is no need to be in the queue for tickets if someone is traveling in these odd hours. However, during the afternoon( from 12. 00 to 3. 00 pm), approximately 290 to 300 passengers travel and there is a steep decline at 16. 00 PM. After it, the number of commuters gradually rises to 290 by 18. 00 pm and slowly falls to only 140 passengers by 22. 00 pm
The graph illustrates the number of passengers commuting by the Underground station in London.

Overall
, the timing of 8. 00 am and 18. 00 pm
are considered
to be the peak hours
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400
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people
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use
this passage in the morning and around 390
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use
it in the evening.

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Very
few commuters (about 100)
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use
the Underground station early morning at 6 p. m. which is
also
followed in the evening at 16. 00 p. m. There is no need to be in the queue for tickets if someone is traveling in these odd hours.

However
, during the afternoon
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from 12. 00 to 3. 00 pm), approximately 290 to 300 passengers travel and there is a steep decline at 16.
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00
PM. After it, the number of commuters
gradually
rises to 290 by 18. 00 pm and
slowly
falls to
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only
140 passengers by 22. 00 pm

IELTS academic The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.

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