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The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London. rVo6

The graph illustrates the number of passengers commuting by the Underground station in London. Overall, the timing of 8. 00 am and 18. 00 pm are considered to be the peak hours because 400 people use this passage in the morning and around 390 use it in the evening. Very few commuters (about 100) use the Underground station early morning at 6 p. m. which is also followed in the evening at 16. 00 p. m. There is no need to be in the queue for tickets if someone is traveling in these odd hours. However, during the afternoon( from 12. 00 to 3. 00 pm), approximately 290 to 300 passengers travel and there is a steep decline at 16. 00 PM. After it, the number of commuters gradually rises to 290 by 18. 00 pm and slowly falls to only 140 passengers by 22. 00 pm

The graph illustrates the number of passengers commuting by the Underground station in London.

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use
 this passage in the morning and around 390 This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 it in the evening.

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use
 the Underground station early morning at 6 p. m. which is also
 followed in the evening at 16. 00 p. m. There is no need to be in the queue for tickets if someone is traveling in these odd hours.

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from 12. 00 to 3. 00 pm), approximately 290 to 300 passengers travel and there is a steep decline at 16. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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 PM. After it, the number of commuters gradually
 rises to 290 by 18. 00 pm and slowly
 falls to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
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 140 passengers by 22. 00 pm