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The church shows Favorite leisure activities of teenagers in UK

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This bar chart illustrates the percentage of activities that teenagers do in their leisure time Favorite leisure activitiesin the UK. By and large, sports are the most popular among the boys whereas ‘’the art and craft’’ is the most interesting field for girls. The percentages of both sexes in computer games are exactly the same. The percentage of girls in art and craft is significantly higher than the boys for about 20%. This is the least popular activity for boys. Similarly, reading books is more popular among females than males. The percentage of boys and girls playing computer games are exactly the same at 15%. The proportion of boys in watching DVDs is the same as in playing computer games while those of girls is a little higher by 5%. The bar chart provides that going to the Park is the second most favourite activity of boys with 25% and that of girls being at about 12%. The proportion of boys who choose sports is the highest among the other fields with about 28%. In contrast, this is the least popular activity of girls. Only about 12% of the girls choose this activity.
This bar chart illustrates the
percentage
of
activities
that
teenagers
do in their leisure time Favorite leisure
activitiesin
the UK.

By and large, sports are the most
popular
among the
boys
whereas ‘’the art and craft’’ is the most interesting field for
girls
. The
percentages
of both sexes in computer games are exactly the same.

The
percentage
of
girls
in art and craft is
significantly
higher than the
boys
for about 20%. This is the least
popular
activity
for
boys
.
Similarly
, reading books is more
popular
among females than males. The
percentage
of
boys
and
girls
playing computer games are exactly the same at 15%.

The proportion of
boys
in watching DVDs is the same as in playing computer games while those of
girls
is a
little
higher by 5%.
The
bar chart provides that going to the Park is the second most
favourite
activity
of
boys
with 25% and that of
girls
being at about 12%.
The
proportion of
boys
who choose sports is the highest among the other fields with about 28%.
In contrast
, this is the least
popular
activity
of
girls
.
Only
about 12% of the
girls
choose this
activity
.
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