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The maps compare changes in the plans of a theatre from 2010 to 2012.

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The maps compare changes in the plans of a theatre from 2010 to 2012. Overall, it is clear that the theatre was expanded in 2012, although the size of the auditorium remained unchanged. The most noticeable change is the construction of a new place, in 2010, the theatre entrance was managed by the main door into an empty space, whereas in 2012 a restaurant directly was built in front of them. In addition, the ticket office was relocated from the left of the entrance to the right, replacing the café which stood there in 2010. To the left of the restaurant, in 2012 storage space occupied the place of the formel ticket office and the administration office. While the auditorium showed no major changes, the stage was expanded in 2012. As part of the extension to the building in 2012, showers for the actors were erected to the left of the stage. In 2010, behind the stage, there was a large dressing room, but it was demolished to make way for a coordination room in 2012. Also, the storage place to the right was converted into an administration office. Furthermore, a smaller dressing room was relocated to the left of the coordination room, next to the showers.
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in the plans of a
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theatre
from 2010 to 2012.

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, it is
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clear
that the
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theatre
was expanded
in 2012, although the size of the auditorium remained unchanged.

The most noticeable
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change
is the construction of a new place, in 2010, the
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theatre
entrance
was managed
by the main door into an empty space, whereas in 2012 a restaurant
directly
was built
in front of them.
In addition
, the ticket
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office
was relocated
from the
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left
of the entrance to the right, replacing the café which stood there in 2010. To the
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left
of the restaurant, in 2012 storage space occupied the place of the
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formel
ticket
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office
and the administration
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. While the auditorium
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showed
no major
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changes
, the stage
was expanded
in 2012.

As part of the extension to the building in 2012, showers for the actors
were erected
to the
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left
of the stage. In 2010, behind the stage, there was a large dressing
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room
,
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it
was demolished
to
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make
way for a coordination
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room
in 2012.
Also
, the storage place to the right
was converted
into an administration
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office
.
Furthermore
, a smaller dressing
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room
was relocated
to the
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left
of the coordination
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,
next
to the showers.
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