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The maps beneath show the town of Stokeford in 2000 and 2020. Sum up the data by choosing and covering the primary capacities and make correlations where suitable.

The maps beneath show the town of Stokeford in 2000 and 2020. Sum up the data by choosing and covering the primary capacities and make correlations where suitable. Ep59q
Th maps show the town of Stokeford in it is old form and in it is new expansion form between 2000 and 2020. Overall, over the 20 years Period Stokeford has experienced many changes and the biggest development was in the farmlund, it has been removed throughout the perlod. Looking at the details regarding 2000 there were a large farmlands to the northeast of the VIlige and to the southwest. The Primary shool located in the centre of the east side. The Shops and Past office were in westren direction of the road and behind the river. The garden and large houses wereto the southeast of Stokeford. To be more Spesific in 2020 the farmland has been removed and the garden with the large house have been replaced by retirement home. The post office is remain, although more shops have been added at the left and right side of the road. The primary school has been extended. The main road, as well as river stoke remained the same.
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the town of
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Stokeford
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form and in it is new expansion form between 2000 and 2020.

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Stokeford
has experienced
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and the biggest development was in the
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regarding 2000 there were a large
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farmlands
to the northeast of the
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VIlige
and to the southwest. The Primary
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shool
located in the
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centre
of the east side. The Shops and Past office were in
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westren
direction of the road and behind the river.
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The
garden and large
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the southeast of
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Stokeford
.

To be more
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in 2020 the farmland has
been removed
and the garden with the large
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have
been replaced
by retirement home. The post office is
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, although more shops have been
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at the
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left
and right side of the road. The primary school has
been extended
.
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The
main road,
as well
as river stoke remained the same.
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IELTS academic The maps beneath show the town of Stokeford in 2000 and 2020. Sum up the data by choosing and covering the primary capacities and make correlations where suitable.

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