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The pie charts above show the amount of goals scored between four teams in two separate seasons.

The pie charts above show the amount of goals scored between four teams in two separate seasons. bEmNl
The two pie charts illustrate the number of goals scored by four different teams over the course of two seasons. Overall, in both years, it can be seen that the most significant percentage of the goals scored were Barcelona and Bayern Munich, which together accounted for over half of the total scored. While the PSG team sharply increased and Juventus dropped in the second season. In terms of the most crucial feature of the chart, the goals scored by PSG comprised of 12. 0% in the first year and this showed dramatically increase of about a third to 40. 0% in 2018/19. On the other hand, in the first season, Juventus dropped 24. 0% which fall down dramatically to10. 0% 6 years later. Likewise, for Barcelona, there was an approximate 8% shrink from 38. 0% to 30. 0% in the second season. In contrast, the reduction scored from both Barcelona and Juventus had witnessed a notable fall while Bayern Munich went down marginally only 6% from 26% to 20% in 2018/19.
The two pie charts illustrate the number of goals
scored
by four
different
teams over the course of two seasons.

Overall
, in both years, it can be
seen
that the most significant percentage of the goals
scored
were Barcelona and
Bayern
Munich, which together accounted for over half of the total
scored
. While the PSG team
sharply
increased and Juventus dropped in the second season.

In terms of the most crucial feature of the chart, the goals
scored
by PSG comprised of 12. 0% in the
first
year and this
showed
dramatically
increase of about a third to 40. 0% in 2018/19.

On the other hand
, in the
first
season, Juventus dropped 24. 0% which fall down
dramatically
to10. 0% 6 years later.
Likewise
, for Barcelona, there was an approximate 8% shrink from 38. 0% to 30. 0% in the second season.
In contrast
, the reduction
scored
from both Barcelona and Juventus had witnessed a notable fall while
Bayern
Munich went down
marginally
only
6% from 26% to 20% in 2018/19.
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