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Cement and concrete prodution map

Cement and concrete prodution map k5MEd
The assigned diagrams depict how cement is prepared by using equipments and stages and cement which is used in the production of concrete for building purposes. Overall, this process is complex, various stages are involved in cement production and concrete. All steps are necessary for the production of cement and concrete. Initially, the main material is linestone and clay are passes through crusher to make it into powder form. In the following stage, this powder is passed through mixer snd rotating heater. After that ti is spread on glinder. In the last stage, it is ready to fill into bags. In terms of concrete production, in the first stage, cement (15%), water (10%), sand (25%) and gravel (50%) are added into concrete mixer. At the last, these are mixed into rotating manner for the production of concrete.
The assigned diagrams depict how
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cement
is prepared
by using equipments and
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stages
and
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cement
which is
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used
in the
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production
of concrete for building purposes.
Overall
, this process is complex, various
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stages
are involved
in
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cement
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production
and concrete. All steps are necessary for the
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production
of
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cement
and concrete.
Initially
, the main material is
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linestone
and clay are passes through crusher to
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make
it into powder form. In the following
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stage
, this powder
is passed
through mixer
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snd
rotating heater.
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After
that ti
is spread
on
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glinder
. In the last
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stage
, it is ready to fill into bags. In terms of concrete
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production
, in the
first
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stage
,
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cement
(15%), water (10%), sand (25%) and gravel (50%) are
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added
into concrete mixer. At the last, these
are mixed
into rotating manner for the
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production
of concrete.
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IELTS academic Cement and concrete prodution map

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
137 words
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