Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The bar chart shows the modes of transport used to travel to work in one European city in 2000 and 2021, as well as a projection for 2025

The bar chart shows the modes of transport used to travel to work in one European city in 2000 and 2021, as well as a projection for 2025 6dyq3
The diagram depicts the methods of commute used in one particular European city in two different years, as well as a prediction for 2025. Overall, it is evident that usage of bike increased gradually and is expected to rise dramatically. In clear contrast, walking by foot lessened significantly and is predicted to shrink marginally along with the usage of car and bus. In 2000, over 35% people preferred to walk by foot while less than 30 percent of the travellers chose the other methods – bus, car and bike. However, in 2021, the preference is seen to be replaced with car and the users more than doubled since 2000 to over 40 percent. Additionally, bus and bike passengers increased marginally while people who favoured walking by foot abated substantially. In 2025, it is forecasted that bike will be the most favoured vehicle at a percentage as high as 45. Travelling to work via car, bus and foot are predicted to drop slightly.
The diagram depicts the methods of commute
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
in one particular European city in two
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
years,
as well
as a prediction for 2025.
Overall
, it is evident that usage of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bike
increased
gradually
and is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expected
to rise
dramatically
. In
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
contrast, walking by foot lessened
significantly
and
is predicted
to shrink
marginally
along with the usage of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
and bus.

In 2000, over 35%
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
preferred to walk by foot while less than 30 percent of the
Possible spelling mistake found.
travellers
chose the other methods
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
–
bus,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bike
.
However
, in 2021, the preference is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
to
be replaced
with
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
and the users more than doubled since 2000 to over 40 percent.
Additionally
, bus and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bike
passengers increased
marginally
while
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
who
Possible spelling mistake. 'favoured' is British English.
favoured
walking by foot abated
substantially
.

In 2025, it
is forecasted
that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bike
will be the most
Possible spelling mistake. 'favoured' is British English.
favoured
vehicle at a percentage as high as 45. Travelling to work via
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
, bus and foot
are predicted
to drop
slightly
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The bar chart shows the modes of transport used to travel to work in one European city in 2000 and 2021, as well as a projection for 2025

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • The bar chart shows the modes of transport used to travel to work in one European city in 2000 and 2021, as well as a projection for 2025