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The maps below shows the changes that took place

The maps below shows the changes that took place O6573
The maps compare changes that occurred at the resort of Templeton between 2000 and 2013. Overall, it can be seen that the area became urban from rural, it was industrialized and modernized throughout the period. In 1990 this place was quite, peaceful and had large amount of trees, houses, public facilities such as school, hospital, railway station, flats, however in 2013 most of the plants and houses were demolished, instead of it, there were constructed supermarket, factory, ferry. In north forests were chopped down to make an airport and residential buildings, while at the center trees were cut down to build a factory. Also, Houses and greenery near the station were knocked down. In the south-west all trees and apartments were removed to make way for a supermarket and increase the quantity of blocks of flats. Another noticeable change is a coastline that was extended along the sea. Finally, new housing venue was relocated near the bridge running from west to east of the Templeton’s resort.
The maps compare
changes
that occurred at the resort of Templeton between 2000 and 2013.

Overall
, it can be
seen
that the area became urban from rural, it
was industrialized
and modernized throughout the period.

In 1990 this place was quite, peaceful and had large amount of trees,
houses
, public facilities such as school, hospital, railway station, flats,
however
in 2013 most of the plants and
houses
were demolished
,
instead
of it, there
were constructed
supermarket, factory, ferry. In north forests
were chopped
down to
make
an airport and residential buildings, while at the center trees were
cut
down to build a factory.
Also
,
Houses
and greenery near the station
were knocked
down. In the south-west all trees and apartments
were removed
to
make
way for a supermarket and increase the quantity of blocks of flats. Another noticeable
change
is a coastline that
was extended
along the sea.
Finally
, new housing venue
was relocated
near the bridge running from west to east of the Templeton’s resort.
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