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bookstore from 2000 to present

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The provided maps clearly depicts extensive renovations that will take place in a bookstore from 2000 to present. Overall, it can be noticeable that the bookstore can be subdivided into 2 main areas: the front and the back. In the front area in the west where the entrance is set. The book area includes a massive travel guidebooks shelf opposite the entrance, a new books stand at the central, and a service desk at the conner are still intact. However, a large fiction shelf in the north has been cut into 4 bookshelves; the mentioned bookshelves include art, hobbies, cookery, and fiction. In the back area in the east, the 3 bookshelves (art, hobbies, and cookery) and a non-fiction shelf are proposed to be replaced by a café zone, along with a three table sets area. Finally, a huge fiction shelf at the corner is put in place be a non-fiction shelf.
The provided maps
clearly
depicts extensive renovations that will take place in a bookstore from 2000 to present.
Overall
, it can be noticeable that the bookstore can
be subdivided
into 2 main
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areas
: the front and the back.

In the front
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area
in the west where the entrance
is set
. The book
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area
includes a massive travel guidebooks
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shelf
opposite the entrance, a new
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books
stand at the central, and a service desk at the
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conner
are
still
intact.
However
, a large fiction
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shelf
in the north has been
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cut
into 4 bookshelves; the mentioned bookshelves include art, hobbies, cookery, and fiction.

In the back
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area
in the east, the 3 bookshelves (art, hobbies, and cookery) and a non-fiction
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shelf
are proposed
to
be replaced
by a café zone, along with a three table sets
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area
.
Finally
, a huge fiction
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shelf
at the corner
is put
in place be a non-fiction
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shelf
.
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IELTS academic bookstore from 2000 to present

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
152 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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