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the maps below shows a center in 2005 and today

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The two maps indicate several significant changes in Colwick Arts Centre between 2005 and today. We can see that the center made many changes during this period, including new buildings and facilities. In the past, the Snack Bar was in the upper left-hand corner of the campus. Now it is demolished. In 2005 there is the meeting room on the left side of center, whereas now a big gallery is there. The toilet is moved to the right side of the center. Now snack bar was demolished and it is replaced by two meeting rooms. There was a space next to the cinema, now it is a drama studio. The concert hall was moved to the right hand of the center. In the past, the Wasteland was the bottom of the center. However, many people planted a lot of trees and built a big stage, outdoor exhibition and performance area there. Thus, it is clear that the center changed and developed during this period.
The two maps indicate several significant
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Centre
between 2005 and
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today
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that the center made
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many
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changes
during this period, including new buildings and facilities.

In the past, the Snack Bar was in the upper
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left
-hand corner of the campus.
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Now
it
is demolished
. In 2005 there is the meeting room on the
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left
side of center, whereas
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now
a
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gallery is there. The toilet is
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moved
to the right side of the center.
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Now
snack bar
was demolished
and it
is replaced
by two meeting rooms. There was a space
next
to the cinema,
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now
it is a drama studio. The concert hall was
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moved
to the right hand of the center. In the past, the Wasteland was the bottom of the center.
However
,
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many
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people
planted
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trees and built a
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big
stage, outdoor exhibition and performance area there.

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clear
that the center
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changed
and developed during this period.
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