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The pie chart depicts the information about the production of passenger cars. These cars manufactured in the various parts of the world such as Europe, South Africa, South America, North America, Greater China and Middle East/ Africa in 2015. Overall, Greater China and Europe did the mass production on worldwide. On the other hand, the Middle East/ Africa and South America manufactured the cars on lowest level. To begin with, the Greater China manufactured the passenger cars on the large scale, it was producing 26% cars in 2015. On the other hand, Europe produced cars only 1% less than Greater China and it obtained the second position in the manufacturing. Meanwhile, North America and Japan/ Korea made 16% and 19% passenger cars in the world. Moreover, South Africa just produce 8% of the passenger cars but South America and Middle East/ Arica produce the lowest cars only 4% and 2% respectively. t
The pie chart depicts the information about the production of
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. These
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manufactured in the various parts of the world such as Europe, South Africa, South America, North America, Greater China and Middle East/ Africa in 2015.

Overall
, Greater China and Europe did the mass production on worldwide.
On the other hand
, the Middle East/ Africa and South America manufactured the
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cars
on lowest level.

To
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with, the Greater China manufactured the
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on the large scale, it was producing 26%
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cars
in 2015.
On the other hand
, Europe produced
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cars
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only
1% less than Greater China and it obtained the second position in the manufacturing. Meanwhile, North America and Japan/ Korea made 16% and 19%
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passenger
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cars
in the world.

Moreover
, South Africa
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produce 8% of the
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cars
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South America and Middle East/
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produce the lowest
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4% and 2%
respectively
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Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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