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The bar graph shows electricity generation by type in New Zealand from 1997 to 2007 in '000s of GWH. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make where relevant.

The bar graph shows electricity generation by type in New Zealand from 1997 to 2007 in '000s of GWH. jb9gN
The bar graph illustrates the electricity generation by two different types of energy namely hytro, wind and thermal in the New Zealand between 1997 to 2007. The scale is thousand of GWH. To begin with, the electricity generation by hytro and wind in the 1997 was 23, 000 GWH. Whereas, the least was thermal which was 10, 000 GWH and the total energy was 33, 000 GWH. Next year, the hytro and wind power increased by only 1, 000 GWH which was 21, 000 GWH and the thermal and total energy had no major change as compared to last year. In the year of 1999 the all given two energy remained same. Furthermore, it is interesting to seen that after 4 year, the hytro and wind power was highest as compared to all the given year which was 22, 000 GWH. Moreover, the thermal and total energy generated almost similar from 2003 to 2007. Overall, it is clearly seen that the least was thermal energy in the all given period and no major effect on hytro and wind, total power in New Zealand by given 11 year period.
The bar graph illustrates the electricity generation by two
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was 33, 000
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had no major
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generated almost similar from 2003 to 2007.

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IELTS academic The bar graph shows electricity generation by type in New Zealand from 1997 to 2007 in '000s of GWH.

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