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The maps below show zhabi high school in 1997 and 2017.

The maps below show zhabi high school in 1997 and 2017. JK1M5
The maps illustrates zhabi high school over 20 years fom 1997 and 2017. Overall, it can be clearly seen that in zhabi high school witness changed. In 1997, zhabi high school boarding school was reduced while in 2017 some trees planted along with boundary and rest of area added for prive sector. To initiate, in 1997 the gym direction was in Northwest whereas in 2017 the gym area was reduced and added some area for classroom. The classroom direction was in Southwest side in 1997 but now the number of classroom was reduced in 2017. There were three science lab in north direction in 1997, however in 2017 it was totally reduced and behalf of that now added biology lab, chemistry lab and physics lab asa well as industrial technology lab and some trees planted along with the boundary. Moreover, boarding school was reduced in 1997 and in 2017 rest of area added for private sector. Basketball court in southeast direction but in 2017 the number of basketball court was reduced. Some recycle zone was added in 2017. In 1997 and 2017 canteen and library was same. Wi-fi zone and trees also added in 2017.
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for classroom. The classroom
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the number of classroom was
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