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The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010.Summarize the information by selecting ad reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The diagrams demonstrate the change of village in Stokeford between the year 1930 and 2010. Overall, the maps illustrate that there are more houses along the street in the present day. However, they remove Farmland and gardens to make the area for houses. Focusing on Stokeford in 1930, it can illustates that there are full of cows and gardens. There are the shops beyond the Post office and Primary school is opposite the road, which have a few houses beside. On the contrary, There are a large area of gardens and house before the primary school with no houses along the road. Turning to the development of Stokeford in the year 2010, it primary focuses on more houses build along 2 sides of the street. On the other hand, these cause the shops, gardens, and farmland to be remove to have more space to develop the houses. They make small street turning left and right in order to build more houses, while the road effect the animal in the farm. Interestingly, The Primary school change to be bigger and the area of the gardens change into Retirement home with a lot of houses inside.
The diagrams demonstrate the
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of village in
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Stokeford
between the year 1930 and 2010.

Overall
, the maps illustrate that there are more
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houses
along the street in the present day.
However
, they remove Farmland and
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gardens
to
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make
the area for
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houses
.

Focusing on
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Stokeford
in 1930, it can
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that there are full of cows and
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gardens
. There are the shops beyond the Post office and
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Primary
school is opposite the road, which have a few
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houses
beside.
On the contrary
, There are a large area of
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gardens
and
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house
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before
the
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primary
school with no
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along the road.

Turning to the development of
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Stokeford
in the year 2010,
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primary
focuses on more
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build along 2 sides of the street.
On the other hand
, these cause the shops,
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gardens
, and farmland to be
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remove
to have more space to develop the
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houses
. They
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street turning
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left
and right in order to build more
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houses
, while the road effect the animal in the farm.
Interestingly
, The
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Primary
school
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change
to be bigger and the area of the
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gardens
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into Retirement home with
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a lot of
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inside.
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IELTS academic The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010.

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