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The maps below show the town of Madisonville in 1995 and the present day

The maps below show the town of Madisonville in 1995 and the present day 266Qx
The given pictures compare the modification of the town in Madisonville from 1995 to the current state. Overall, the village has transformed from an industrialized town into a residential zone with several modern facilities for the purpose of improving the living standard of the townsfolk. In 1995, a fishing port and fish market were located on the southern coastline. The fish market was replaced to make way for apartments. In addition, there is no sign of a fishing port. While the old shop was demolished, a new restaurant has appeared. Furthermore, the hotel still remains and the car park has been constructed next to it. To the north- west of the town, there are more houses have been built along the main road, another road was expanded to the west. The farmland and forest park located in the north-east were pulled down to give way to the golf and tennis courses, respectively.
The
given
pictures compare the modification of the town in
Madisonville
from 1995 to the
current
state.

Overall
, the village has transformed from an industrialized town into a residential zone with several modern facilities for the purpose of improving the living standard of the townsfolk.

In 1995, a fishing port and fish market
were located
on the southern coastline. The fish market
was replaced
to
make
way for apartments.
In addition
, there is no
sign
of a fishing port. While the
old
shop
was demolished
, a new restaurant has appeared.
Furthermore
, the hotel
still
remains and the car park has
been constructed
next
to it.

To the north- west of the town, there are more
houses
have
been built
along the main road, another road
was expanded
to the west. The farmland and forest park located in the north-east
were pulled
down to give way to the golf and tennis courses,
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The maps below show the town of Madisonville in 1995 and the present day

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
152 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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