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The maps below show the town of Langley in 1910 and 1950. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the town of Langley in 1910 and 1950. PVLBw
The maps illustrate the change took place in the town of Langley from 1910 to 1950. From the overall analysis, it is manifest that, the city has significant modifications with the inclusion of certain amenities such as park, flats, and store, leading to its refurbishment. To begin with, in 1910, there was a town houses in the west side of the community but in 1950, the newest flats has been added in the west side. Also, the railway line had removed in the year 1950. Moreover, in 1910, there was factory, and wasteland in the north side of town. In addition, the east of the municipality was occupied by store, laundry, and cafe as shown in figure. However, in case of the year 1950, sherman park was constructed in the middle of city whereas new lane has been developed in the town. Furthermore, Langley town had a store in the south-east and railway cottages was demolished in this year. At the end of the period, in the north of town, a huge shermon mansions had developed as shown in figure.
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change
took place in the
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town
of Langley from 1910 to 1950.

From the
overall
analysis, it is manifest that, the city has significant modifications with the inclusion of certain amenities such as park, flats, and store, leading to its refurbishment.

To
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begin
with, in 1910, there was a
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town
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houses
in the west side of the community
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but
in 1950, the newest flats has been
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added
in the west side.
Also
, the railway line had removed in the year 1950.
Moreover
, in 1910, there was factory, and wasteland in the north side of
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town
.
In addition
, the east of the municipality
was occupied
by store, laundry, and
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cafe
as shown in figure.

However
, in case of the year 1950,
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sherman
park
was constructed
in the middle of city whereas new lane has
been developed
in the
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town
.
Furthermore
, Langley
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town
had a store in the south-east and railway cottages
was demolished
in this year. At the
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end
of the period, in the north of
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town
, a huge
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shermon
mansions had developed as shown in figure.
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IELTS academic The maps below show the town of Langley in 1910 and 1950.

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