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The graphs below show the growth in wages within the G7 Nations between 2000-2007 and 2008-2012.

The graphs below show the growth in wages within the G7 Nations between 2000-2007 and 2008-2012. 15kgL

Both figures below reveal the payrolls of how a special and rich group of countries during two periods, 2000 to 2007, and 2008 to 2012. Overall, it can be seen that the UK started the series with highest growth over 5%, followed by the US with rates near 3, 5 in and Canada with 3% in the first period. European nations showed started with a minor rate, but stayed more stable during all periods, except Italy. Japan oscillated your wage rates all time that was analysed. Canada, the US, and the UK demonstrated a constant and strong trend to grow in the first period. But, later just Canada keeping this positive tendency. The UK plunges your rates through for years and achieved negative rates as -2% in 2011. The US in the same period registered two negatives years and a small growth from 2009 to 2011. The European G7 nation's measures had majority increased, except Italy. France and Germany have a great performance during all time they registered only three years with a negative rate, France in 2008 with -02% and Germany with imperceptive decreases near 0, 1% in 2004 and 2005. The Italians numbers described a distinct situation, this context represents several oscillations over the years with positive picks with 2% in 2004 and droops like 2011 with -2%. Japan, the only Asian nation in the G7, exhibited similar behaviour of Italians, inconstant rates, in some moments rocket up as in 2011 with +3% and other moments plunge as 2001 with -2%.

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periods
, 2000 to 2007, and 2008 to 2012.

Overall
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seen
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rates
 near 3, 5 in and Canada with 3% in the first
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period
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showed
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started
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rate
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but
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periods
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analysed
.

Canada, the US, and the UK demonstrated a constant and strong trend to grow in the first
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period
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But
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just
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positive
 tendency. The UK plunges your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestimatequotapercentageamountstandard
rates
 through for years and achieved This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
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rates
 as -2% in 2011. The US in the same You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermspanstretchseasonagecourse
period
 registered two negatives years and a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 growth from 2009 to 2011.

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The
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only
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negative
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rate
, France in 2008 with -02% and Germany with imperceptive decreases near 0, 1% in 2004 and 2005. The Italians numbers This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :characterizedportrayed
described
 a distinct situation, this context represents several oscillations over the years with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 picks with 2% in 2004 and droops like 2011 with -2%.

Japan, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
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behaviour
 of Italians, inconstant You use this word too often, consider replacing it withestimatequotapercentageamountstandard
rates
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some
 moments rocket up as in 2011 with +3% and other moments plunge as 2001 with -2%. 