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The maps below show the grange house property in 1800 and in 2000. summarise the information and making comparison were relevant

The maps below show the grange house property in 1800 and in 2000. LbWWp
The two maps show the grange house property in 1800 and in 2000. In 1800 there were no foot paths, gardens, car park and pavements. Flower Garden and viewing tower are remain in the same place in both maps, but the flower garden is bigger in 2000 than the were in 1800. Both flower garden and viewing tower surrounded by foot paths in 2000, mean while in 1800 there were no foot paths displayed. Stables also in the same place and size at both maps, however in 2000 the name changes into old stables (converted floats) and surrounded by school yard, gate and brick walls. In 1800 the gate is located solely at the left upper corner of the map meanwhile, in 2000 the location of the gate appears in two places, the first one is at the left lower part of the map, the other one located at below part of the map. The yard in 1800 also changes in terms of location and name, in 2000 the yard location moved to the left side of the map, also the name change into school yard. In 1800 gardeners accommodation surrounded by square figure mean while in 2000 the name change into gardens and surrounded by foot paths, although the location remain in the same place. In 1800 the grange house change name into grange house school in 2000 and having a rottion from below to the left part of the map
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property in 1800 and in 2000. In 1800 there were no foot
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,
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, car park and pavements. Flower
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and viewing tower are remain in the same
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in both
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,
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the flower
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is bigger in 2000 than the were in 1800. Both flower
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and viewing tower
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surrounded
by foot
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paths
in 2000,
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displayed. Stables
also
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and size at both
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,
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, gate and brick walls.

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upper corner of the
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meanwhile, in 2000 the
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of the gate appears in two
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. The
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in 1800
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, in 2000 the
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into school
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. In 1800 gardeners accommodation
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, although the
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. In 1800 the grange
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into grange
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school in 2000 and having a
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IELTS academic The maps below show the grange house property in 1800 and in 2000.

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