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The international companies should try to tackle the problem of global warming? Give your reasons and solutions

The international companies should try to tackle the problem of global warming? Give your reasons and solutions 2xQQX

In this cutting edge epoch, thr harm of global warming is burgeoning all over the world. All the community are try their best to tackle the threat of ozone layer. Without any qualms, I will give my own opinion regarding this situation with the relevant examples in the forthcoming paragraphs. To embark upon, the better environment is mandatory for the human beings to survive a long life on the earth. However, there is decline the level of atmosphere as the reason of unfair activities of the human beings such as the individual do not make afforts to clean the surroundings where the live. Moreover, to tackle this problem the world community should take effective steps to overcome this circumstances as this is the responsibilities of the international community because if the steps are taken on high level then they are more relevant, if people take the steps on a low level. For instance the international community should organise their teams to aware the public related to the atmosphere. Moving furthere, the international community should also take measures against the worst activities of the masses. In addition to it, the world community should also advertise their shows on TV that is why public learn about these facts of the ozone layer. Additionally, this is not only the responsibility of the community on a world level but also the duty of the general public about the environment. To epitome, the general public should also organise thier teams in order to face this problem. To recapitulate, if the change is crucial as well as require on a large scale the the world's community can do their effective decisions to overcome the obstacles of ozone layer.

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