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The bar chart shows the rate of social media usage between males and females aged 12 to 17. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The bar chart validate the percentage of social platform convention between males and females from 12 to 17 years of age. The most noticable aspects about the graph is that the rate for females social media usage were alway higher than males. It can also be observed that the age of 16 had the highest handling ratio and in contrary those who only 12 years old had the least. Lassies whose age is 16 were at the peak with the scale of nearly 18, while this rate for the boys is at the cap with only more than half of the holdout compared to the girls at the same age. In contrast to the 16 years of age teenager the 12 year old youngster had the minimest with females marginally with nearly 4, and the males were not any better with just barely about 2. On the other hand the rate of usage males at the age of 13 and 14 in social network-ing website were very comparable, at just slighly more than 3. And the same thing replicated for males at 16 to 17 years of age with roughly more than 6.
The bar chart validate the percentage of social platform convention between
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males
and females from 12 to 17 years of age.

The most
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noticable
aspects about the graph is that the rate for females social media usage were
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alway
higher than
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males
. It can
also
be observed
that the
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age
of 16 had the highest handling ratio and in contrary those who
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only
12 years
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had the least.

Lassies whose
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age
is 16 were at the peak with the scale of
nearly
18, while this rate for the boys is at the cap with
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only
more than half of the holdout compared to the girls at the same
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age
.
In contrast
to the 16 years of
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age
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teenager
the 12
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year
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old
youngster had the
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minimest
with females
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with
nearly
4, and the
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males
were not any better with
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barely
about 2.

On the other hand
the rate of usage
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males
at the
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age
of 13 and 14 in social
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network-ing
website were
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comparable, at
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more than 3. And the same thing replicated for
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males
at 16 to 17 years of
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age
with roughly more than 6.
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IELTS academic The bar chart shows the rate of social media usage between males and females aged 12 to 17.

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193 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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