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I can easily work with software such as word, power point... that cannot be done on the phone.

I can easily work with software such as word, power point. . . that cannot be done on the phone. 3W55Y

There are some reasons why I decided to purchase a laptop. Firstly, it is very useful for my studies. For example, I can surf the Internet to learn English and take it anywhere if I want. In addition, I can use my laptop for entertainment. Watching films or listening to music is easier. I can easily work with software such as word, power point. . . that cannot be done on the phone. There are some reasons why I decided to purchase a laptop. Firstly, it is very useful for my studies. For example, I can surf the Internet to learn English and take it anywhere if I want. In addition, I can use my laptop for entertainment. Watching films or listening to music is easier. I can easily work with software such as word, power point. . . that cannot be done on the phone.

There are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 reasons why I decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdesktop computerworkstationminicomputer
laptop
. Firstly
, it is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 useful for my studies. For example
, I can surf the Internet to learn English and take it anywhere if I want. In addition
, I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdesktop computerworkstationminicomputer
laptop
 for entertainment. Watching films or listening to music is easier. I can easily
 work with software such as word, Did you mean "PowerPoint" (= Microsoft presentation software)?PowerPoint
power point
. Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThat
that
 cannot be done
 on the phone. There are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 reasons why I decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdesktop computerworkstationminicomputer
laptop
. Firstly
, it is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 useful for my studies. For example
, I can surf the Internet to learn English and take it anywhere if I want. In addition
, I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdesktop computerworkstationminicomputer
laptop
 for entertainment. Watching films or listening to music is easier. I can easily
 work with software such as word, Did you mean "PowerPoint" (= Microsoft presentation software)?PowerPoint
power point
. Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThat
that
 cannot be done
 on the phone. 