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I can easily work with software such as word, power point... that cannot be done on the phone.

I can easily work with software such as word, power point. . . that cannot be done on the phone. 3W55Y

There are some reasons why I decided to purchase a laptop. Firstly, it is very useful for my studies. For example, I can surf the Internet to learn English and take it anywhere if I want. In addition, I can use my laptop for entertainment. Watching films or listening to music is easier. I can easily work with software such as word, power point. . . that cannot be done on the phone. There are some reasons why I decided to purchase a laptop. Firstly, it is very useful for my studies. For example, I can surf the Internet to learn English and take it anywhere if I want. In addition, I can use my laptop for entertainment. Watching films or listening to music is easier. I can easily work with software such as word, power point. . . that cannot be done on the phone.

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laptop
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power point
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that
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 on the phone. There are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 reasons why I decided to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdesktop computerworkstationminicomputer
laptop
. Firstly
, it is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 useful for my studies. For example
, I can surf the Internet to learn English and take it anywhere if I want. In addition
, I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdesktop computerworkstationminicomputer
laptop
 for entertainment. Watching films or listening to music is easier. I can easily
 work with software such as word, Did you mean "PowerPoint" (= Microsoft presentation software)?PowerPoint
power point
. Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
Don't put a space before the full stop.
.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterThat
that
 cannot be done
 on the phone. 

IELTS academic I can easily work with software such as word, power point. . . that cannot be done on the phone.

Academic

American English

1 paragraphs

146 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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