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The graph indicates the population change progress of India and China since 2000 and gives prediction their changes in the future.

The graph indicates the population change progress of India and China since 2000 and gives prediction their changes in the future. K3oo6
In 2000, the China population was 1. 25 billion and about 0. 25 billion higher than the India population which was 1 billion. India population has increased 0. 3 billion between 2000 and the present. China’s population has increased 0. 2 billion to reach more than 1. 4 billion. It shows clearly that the population in India will rise more quickly than in China, and it predicts that the two will reach at the same number of population of 1. 45 billion by 2030. Subsequently, China's population decreases slightly to 1. 4 billion in 2050. In contrast, India's population will increase quickly and reach 1. 6 billion. Consequently, India’s population is going to have a steady growth with the result is leaving China behind. On the other hand, China’s population will reach the highest in 2030 and start to fall.
In 2000, the China
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was 1. 25
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and about 0. 25
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higher than the India
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which was 1
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. India
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has increased 0. 3
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between 2000 and the present. China’s
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has increased 0. 2
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to
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reach
more than 1. 4 billion.

It
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shows
clearly
that the
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in India will rise more
quickly
than in China, and it predicts that the two will
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reach
at the same number of
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population
of 1. 45
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billion
by 2030.
Subsequently
, China's
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decreases
slightly
to 1. 4
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billion
in 2050.
In contrast
, India's
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will increase
quickly
and
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reach
1. 6 billion.

Consequently
, India’s
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population
is going to have a steady growth with the result is leaving China behind.
On the other hand
, China’s
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population
will
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reach
the highest in 2030 and
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start
to fall.

IELTS academic The graph indicates the population change progress of India and China since 2000 and gives prediction their changes in the future.

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