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The maps below show the changes that took place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 2000 and 2013.

The maps below show the changes that took place at the seaside resort of Templeton between 2000 and 2013. 3knX

The maps illustrate how the seaside resort of Templeton changed from 2000 to 2013. It can be seen that in 2000 there were mostly houses and more greenery, while in 2013 there were flats and block on the places that the houses used to be. There was not an airport in 2000s, but in 2013 an airport was built. In 2000 the houses nearby the sea were demolished and there was constructed a supermarket in 2013. Next to the hospital were added new houses. In the 2013 the Railway station was extended and it was crossing the river. The greenery was removed and new factory was located to the east of the river. Around the lake in 2013 were built a new block of flats, where only houses used to stand there in 2000. Between the Supermarket and the lake were built new houses. A Ferry was added on to the sea in 2013.

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 from 2000 to 2013.

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 to the east of the river. Around the lake in 2013 were built
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