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The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years

The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years mdAK

The pie charts compares the number of five different energy products of France in the years 1995-2005 Overall, it can be seen that coal was the major utilized product in both years whereas other products were the least used energy products. Furthermore, the most remarkable change experienced by petro during the period. In 1995, the proportion of coal was approximately less than a third of the total. Similarly, gas proportions were the second largest power resource with 29, 63%. Then the figures for petro totalling around 30% which far higher than the numbers for nuclear and other products were 6, 40% and 4, 90% respectively in a year. Moving further, in 2005, the trends for gas accounted the most highest percent with 30, 31% while percentages for other resources were the least growth by one in ten. Coal had remained constant but there was a increase in ratios for nuclear accounting for 10, 10%. Then petro was the only energy source didn't show growth which decreased to 19, 5%.

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 of France in the years 1995-2005 Overall
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. Furthermore
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petro
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