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The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015. 7Bo2
The chart depicts the percentage of people in Canada using multiple social networking sites for two years including 2014 and 2015. Overall, It is clear that the figures for people using no sites and one site decreased, whereas the number of Canadians having two sites, three sites, four sites and five sites increased. In addition, one-site people was the highest in 2014 and 2015 The number of people using one site accounted for the highest percentage compared to the other categories in both years, roughly 36% in 2014 and fell to 28% in 2015. Whereas people used five sites reached the lowest level ( just 2% in 2014 and 4% in 2015), a slight increase was evident. The proportion of Canadians having none and two social networking sites stood at 22% and 24% in the same year. Two-site users slightly increased from 23% to 24%, while the number of people uninterested in social networks decreased by one percent in 2015. The figure for people using three sites, four sites made up about 12%, 5% in 2014. The rates of people in Canada using more than three sites, four sites grew to 16%, 8% in 2015.
The chart depicts the percentage of
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in Canada using multiple social networking
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for two years including 2014 and 2015.

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using no
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and one
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decreased, whereas the number of Canadians having two
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, three
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, four
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and five
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increased.
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was the highest in 2014 and 2015

The number of
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using one
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accounted for the highest percentage compared to the other categories in both years, roughly 36% in 2014 and fell to 28% in 2015. Whereas
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reached the lowest level
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2% in 2014 and 4% in 2015), a slight increase was evident. The proportion of Canadians having none and two social networking
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stood at 22% and 24% in the same year. Two-site users
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increased from 23% to 24%, while the number of
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uninterested in social networks decreased by one percent in 2015.

The figure for
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using three
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, four
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made up about 12%, 5% in 2014.

The rates of
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in Canada using more than three
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, four
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grew to 16%, 8% in 2015.
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IELTS academic The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015.

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