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The maps below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960.

The maps below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960. xn0b
The maps illustrate the developments which took place in the Queen Mary Hospital from 1960 to 2000. Overall, it is clear that the main road and hospital area have remained the same while shopping center and farmland were disappeared, and cancer center was appeared and enlarged. Moreover, the pharmacy has also appeared. Furthermore, nursing school was added, and nursing school and car park were reduced in terms of space. The most noticeable things are that the main road in the north and the hospital area in the east have remained the same in all three years. From 1960 to 1980, the shopping center in the west was converted into a cancer center and pharmacy whilst farmland was removed and made a way for nursing school. However, the car park has remained the same. From 1980 to 2000, a place for nursing school and the car park was reduced to enlarge the cancer center. By contrast, there were no changes in the place of pharmacy. The maps illustrate the developments which took place in the Queen Mary Hospital from 1960 to 2000. Overall, it is clear that the main road and hospital area have remained the same while shopping center and farmland were disappeared, and cancer center was appeared and enlarged. Moreover, the pharmacy has also appeared. Furthermore, nursing school was added, and nursing school and car park were reduced in terms of space. The most noticeable things are that the main road in the north and the hospital area in the east have remained the same in all three years. From 1960 to 1980, the shopping center in the west was converted into a cancer center and pharmacy whilst farmland was removed and made a way for nursing school. However, the car park has remained the same. From 1980 to 2000, a place for nursing school and the car park was reduced to enlarge the cancer center. By contrast, there were no changes in the place of pharmacy.
The maps illustrate the developments which took
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place
in the Queen Mary
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Hospital
from 1960 to 2000.

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clear
that the
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main
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road
and
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hospital
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area
have
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remained
the same while
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shopping
center and
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farmland
were disappeared
, and
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cancer
center
was appeared
and enlarged.
Moreover
, the
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pharmacy
has
also
appeared.
Furthermore
, nursing
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school
was
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added
, and nursing
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school
and
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car
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park
were
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reduced
in terms of space.

The most noticeable things are that the
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main
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road
in the north and the
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hospital
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area
in the east have
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remained
the same in all three years. From 1960 to 1980, the
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shopping
center in the west
was converted
into a
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cancer
center and
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pharmacy
whilst
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farmland
was removed
and made a way for nursing
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school
.
However
, the
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car
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park
has
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remained
the same.

From 1980 to 2000, a
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place
for nursing
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school
and the
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car
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park
was
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reduced
to enlarge the
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cancer
center. By contrast, there were no
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changes
in the
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place
of
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pharmacy
. The maps illustrate the developments which took
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place
in the Queen Mary
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Hospital
from 1960 to 2000.

Overall
, it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
that the
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main
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road
and
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hospital
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area
have
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remained
the same while
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shopping
center and
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farmland
were disappeared
, and
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cancer
center
was appeared
and enlarged.
Moreover
, the
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pharmacy
has
also
appeared.
Furthermore
, nursing
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school
was
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added
, and nursing
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school
and
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car
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park
were
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reduced
in terms of space.

The most noticeable things are that the
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main
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road
in the north and the
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hospital
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area
in the east have
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remained
the same in all three years. From 1960 to 1980, the
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shopping
center in the west
was converted
into a
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cancer
center and
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pharmacy
whilst
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farmland
was removed
and made a way for nursing
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school
.
However
, the
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car
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park
has
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remained
the same.

From 1980 to 2000, a
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place
for nursing
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school
and the
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car
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park
was
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reduced
to enlarge the
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cancer
center. By contrast, there were no
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changes
in the
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place
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pharmacy
.
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IELTS academic The maps below show the changes that have taken place at Queen Mary Hospital since its construction in 1960.

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