Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Number of men and women in urther education in Britain

Number of men and women in urther education in Britain lYd9

The bar chart illustrates the number of men and women who participated in further eduation in Britain whether it is full-time or part-time. It is divided into three time period. Overall, the part-time mode had a higher participation rate compared to the full-time education for both gender. Throughout the years, the trend of studying part time is relatively stable, however there was a drastic increase of woman engaged in part-time education in the 1990s. In the 1970s, there were around 1 million who were participating in part-time education, while there were only approximately 750, 000 females in the same time period. However, at the end of the 3 year period, from 1990 to 1991, there were a lot more woman in part-time education as it reached its peak of roughly 1, 1 million participation. Comparatively, the number of men was lower compared to its peak in 1970s where it is only at roughly 900, 000 males. With regards to full-time study, the trend for both gender was increasing with a drastic increase happening for female in 1980-1981 where the numbers were almost tripled from roughly 70, 000 in 1970 and approximately 200, 000 in 1980.

The bar chart illustrates the number of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
men
 and women who participated in further
Possible spelling mistake found.educationequation
eduation
 in Britain whether it is full-time or part-time. It is divided
 into three time period.

Overall
, the part-time mode had a higher participation rate compared to the full-time You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinformationtrainingsciencestudyschooling
education
 for both gender. Throughout the years, the trend of studying This word is normally spelled with hyphen.part-time
part time
 is relatively
 stable, however
 there was a drastic increase of woman engaged in part-time You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinformationtrainingsciencestudyschooling
education
 in the 1990s.

In the 1970s, there were around 1 million who were participating in part-time You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinformationtrainingsciencestudyschooling
education
, while there were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 approximately 750, 000 females in the same time period. However
, at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the When a number forms part of an adjectival compound, use a hyphen: "3-year"3-year
3 year
 period, from 1990 to 1991, there were a lot more woman in part-time You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisciplineinformationtrainingsciencestudyschooling
education
 as it reached its peak of roughly 1, 1 million participation. Comparatively
, the number of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
men
 was lower compared to its peak The article is probably missing here: "in the 1970s".in the 1970s
in 1970s
 where it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 at roughly 900, 000 males.

Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".In regard toWith regard toRegarding
With regards to
 full-time study, the trend for both gender was increasing with a drastic increase happening for female in 1980-1981 where the numbers were almost tripled from roughly 70, 000 in 1970 and approximately 200, 000 in 1980. 