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The bar chart illustrates the participation of 5 to 14-year mature children divided by gender in five kinds of leisure activities (skateboarding, bike riding, watching television/videos, electronic and computer games and art and craft) in Australia.

The bar chart illustrates the participation of 5 to 14-year mature children divided by gender in five kinds of leisure activities (skateboarding, bike riding, watching television/videos, electronic and computer games and art and craft) in Australia. prX0
The bar chart illustrates the participation of 5 to 14-year mature children divided by gender in five kinds of leisure activities (skateboarding, bike riding, watching television/videos, electronic and computer games and art and craft) in Australia. Units are measure in percent. Overall, the most popular leisure activity in both gender groups was watching TV or videos. Whereas in terms of girls, the least popular activity was skateboarding, boys preferred art and craft the least. The most significant difference between the participation of boys and girls also can be seen here. In terms of girls, they participated more in art and craft-related activities compared to boys (55% and 35% respectively). In all the other leisure activities — except watching TV or videos, where the rate of participation was equal regarding both gender groups (100%) — boys' participation was higher. Regard to the activities that were more preferred by boys, the most significant difference can be observed at electronic and computer games. A slightly more than 80% of boys liked this leisure activity, while only 60% of girls felt the same way. Compared to this, both girls and boys preferred riding bike in their free time slightly less. The figures here are 58% ad 75% respectively.
The bar chart illustrates the
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participation
of 5 to 14-year mature children divided by gender in five kinds of
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leisure
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activities
(skateboarding, bike riding, watching television/videos, electronic and computer games and art and craft) in Australia. Units are measure in percent.

Overall
, the most popular
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leisure
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activity
in both gender groups was watching TV or videos. Whereas in terms of
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girls
, the least popular
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activity
was skateboarding,
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boys
preferred art and craft the least. The most significant difference between the
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participation
of
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boys
and
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girls
also
can be
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seen
here.

In terms of
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girls
, they participated more in art and craft-related
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activities
compared to
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boys
(55% and 35%
respectively
). In all the other
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leisure
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activities
— except watching TV or videos, where the rate of
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participation
was equal regarding both gender groups (100%) — boys'
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participation
was higher.

Regard to the
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activities
that were more preferred by
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boys
, the most significant difference can
be observed
at electronic and computer games. A
slightly
more than 80% of
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boys
liked this
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leisure
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activity
, while
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only
60% of
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girls
felt the same way. Compared to this, both
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girls
and
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boys
preferred riding bike in their free time
slightly
less. The figures here are 58% ad 75%
respectively
.
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IELTS academic The bar chart illustrates the participation of 5 to 14-year mature children divided by gender in five kinds of leisure activities (skateboarding, bike riding, watching television/videos, electronic and computer games and art and craft) in Australia.

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6.5
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