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The maps below show the changes of Poulton town between 1900 and 1935

The maps below show the changes of Poulton town between 1900 and 1935 gGJ3l
The 2 maps depict an area of the town of Poulton in the years 1900 and 1935 and the urban developments that took place. Overall, the town has undergone many dramatic changes, the provision for accommodation and leisure facilities has increased, replacing what was previously used for industrial features and mostly for nothing. One key change is the construction of blocks of flats on Trent Street on the west side of the Poulton town at the site of the former terraced houses. Meanwhile, the center of the town also witnessed significant changes, with the flattening of all houses in the south of the center of the map on Bayley Street, and the relocation of the track, railway workers' quarters, and open space is transformed into a land for the spacious park and playground for children. In the northeast of Poulton, the old laundry was redeveloped on a small portion of the vacant lot, accompanied by a cafe being built on the former place of the launderette. The factory and all the east side of terraced houses were demolished to make way for the Barley mansions which had expanded and dominated two-thirds of the wasteland before. Whereas, the southeast side of the town also witnessed significant changes, with the new lane being instructed by a row of 3 shops which were once located next to the laundromat.
The 2 maps depict an area of the
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Poulton
in the years 1900 and 1935 and the urban developments that took place.

Overall
, the
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town
has undergone
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many
dramatic
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changes
, the provision for accommodation and leisure facilities has increased, replacing what was previously
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used
for industrial features and
mostly
for nothing.

One key
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change
is the construction of blocks of flats on Trent Street on the west side of the
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Poulton
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town
at the site of the former terraced
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houses
. Meanwhile, the center of the
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town
also
witnessed significant
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, with the flattening of all
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houses
in the south of the center of the map on
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Bayley
Street, and the relocation of the
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track
, railway workers' quarters, and open space
is transformed
into a land for the spacious park and playground for children.

In the northeast of
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Poulton
, the
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old
laundry
was redeveloped
on a
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small
portion of the vacant lot, accompanied by a
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cafe
being built
on the former place of the launderette. The factory and all the east side of terraced
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houses
were demolished
to
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make
way for the Barley mansions which had expanded and dominated two-thirds of the wasteland
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before
. Whereas, the southeast side of the
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also
witnessed significant
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changes
, with the new lane
being instructed
by a row of 3 shops which were once located
next
to the laundromat.

IELTS academic The maps below show the changes of Poulton town between 1900 and 1935

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