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The maps below show the changes in the art gallery ground floor in 2005 and present day.

The maps below show the changes in the art gallery ground floor in 2005 and present day. LR3n
The maps illustrate the differences in the layout of an art gallery in 2005 and now. Overall, the art gallery has been improved with the installation of a number of services and facilities, with some areas of the gallery converted for other purposes. As can be seen from the map, the cafe in the rear-left corner of the gallery has been replaced by a gallery shop. The space for the gallery shop is smaller than the space of the old café, which allowed for a new lift to be constructed next to the stairwell. Meanwhile, the gallery office next to the café has been removed and made way for the installation of a new vending machine. Furthermore, the reception desk has been moved to the center of the entrance hall, and a wheelchair access ramp added to the main entrance. Regarding the exhibition areas, the space for exhibition room 4 has now been divided into two new areas; one for temporary exhibitions and the other for children. However, no changes have occurred to exhibition rooms 1-3.
The maps illustrate the differences in the layout of an art
gallery
in 2005 and
now
.

Overall
, the art
gallery
has been
improved
with the installation of a number of services and facilities, with
some
areas of the
gallery
converted for other purposes.

As can be
seen
from the map, the
cafe
in the rear-
left
corner of the
gallery
has
been replaced
by a
gallery
shop. The space for the
gallery
shop is smaller than the space of the
old
café, which
allowed
for a new lift to
be constructed
next
to the stairwell. Meanwhile, the
gallery
office
next
to the café has
been removed
and made way for the installation of a new vending machine.
Furthermore
, the reception desk has been
moved
to the center of the entrance hall, and a wheelchair access ramp
added
to the main entrance.

Regarding the exhibition areas, the space for exhibition room 4 has
now
been divided
into two new areas; one for temporary exhibitions and the other for children.
However
, no
changes
have occurred to exhibition rooms 1-3.
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IELTS academic The maps below show the changes in the art gallery ground floor in 2005 and present day.

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