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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1970 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1970 and 2005. mN8d
The bar chart provide a information about female school leaver going into higher education in 1970 and 2005 in these countries UK, USA, Canada, japan and Germany. Overall, in Canada 60% of lady going into secondary higher education for the year 1970 and 2005. while, in 1970 japan shows least interest in education and after that 20% increase woman interest in education in 2005. In the year 1970, the highest number of woman going into education with 60 percentage of the total users in Canada. Next in the line were woman belongs with Germany also going school with 50% capacity in the year 1970. In UK and USA female school leavers going into higher education in 1970 with 35%, 40% respectively. While, in japan were least percentage of woman going into education with 20 percentage of total users in 1970. However, 60 percentage of woman going into secondary higher education in Canada for the year 2005. As same trend follow in UK with 60 percentage of total user in 2005. while, USA and Germany steadily decrease with 55% to approximately 53 percentage in 2005. While, the lowest percentage of woman going school in 2005 with 40 percentage of users.
The bar chart provide
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a
information about female
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
school leaver
going into higher
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education
in 1970 and 2005 in these countries UK, USA, Canada, japan and Germany.

Overall
, in Canada 60% of lady going into secondary higher
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education
for the
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year
1970 and 2005.
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while
, in 1970 japan
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shows
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least
interest in
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education
and after that 20% increase
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woman
interest in
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education
in 2005.

In the
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year
1970, the highest number of
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woman
going into
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education
with 60
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percentage
of the total
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users
in Canada.
Next
in the line were
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woman
belongs with Germany
also
going
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school
with 50% capacity in the
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year
1970. In UK and USA female
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
school leavers
going into higher
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education
in 1970 with 35%, 40%
respectively
.
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While
, in japan were
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least
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percentage
of
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woman
going into
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education
with 20
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percentage
of total
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users
in 1970.

However
, 60
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percentage
of
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woman
going into secondary higher
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education
in Canada for the
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year
2005.
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As
same trend follow in UK with 60
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percentage
of total
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user
in 2005.
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while
, USA and Germany
steadily
decrease with 55% to approximately 53
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percentage
in 2005.
“While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While
, the lowest
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percentage
of
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woman
going
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school
in 2005 with 40
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percentage
of
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users
.
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IELTS academic The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1970 and 2005.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
199 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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