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the maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development

the maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development gg2D

The centre of a town named Islip is shown in the maps, along with additional plans for its planned development. Overall, there will be the addition of a dual carriageway surrounding the town, along with the construction of additional housing, a bus station, a shopping centre and a car park. The map illustrates significant changes to the town, firstly with the building of a Dual carriageway which will bypass the town going North and south, replacing the countryside and the old main road, which will become a Pedestrians only walkway. There will also be the construction of new housing, in the north-east and south-east of the town. The shops in the northern part of the town will be renovated to become a bus station, a shopping centre and a car park. While the park will be reduced in size however its place will remain unchanged, similarly to the school which will remain in its place but be visibly larger.

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centre
 of a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 named Possible spelling mistake found.SlipISIPI slipIs lip
Islip
is shown
 in the maps, along with additional plans for its planned development.

Overall
, there will be the addition of a dual carriageway surrounding the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
, along with the construction of additional housing, a bus station, a shopping Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 and a car park.

The map illustrates significant This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
, firstly
 with the building of a Dual carriageway which will bypass the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 going North and south, replacing the countryside and the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 main road, which will become a Pedestrians This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 walkway. There will also
 be the construction of new housing, in the north-east and south-east of the town.

The shops in the northern part of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcitymunicipalitymetropolistownship
town
 will be renovated
 to become a bus station, a shopping Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 and a car park. While the park will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 in size however
 its place will remain unchanged, similarly
 to the school which will remain in its place This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 be visibly
 larger. 