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the chart below shows the percentage of males and females higer educational qualifications in 5 countries in 2001

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The bar chart provides information about the higher educational qualifications of males and females, in Japan, United States, Switzerland, Britain, and Germany during 2001. On analyzing the data, it is apparent that Switzerland has the highest percentage of male graduates with about 45% closely followed by Germany, the United States, and Britain with their graduation percentage of men being around 35%. Japan has the least percentage of male graduates at about 30%. With regard to female educational qualifications, it is evident that Germany is leading with a percentage of about 45%. The United States closely follows the trend in female graduation with a percentage of about 40% followed by Switzerland and Britain with female higher educational qualifications being around 35 and 30 respectively. Japan again has the least percentage of female graduates with a percentage of about 25. Overall, it is evident that Switzerland has more male graduates, whereas Germany has the highest female higher educational qualifications. The United States and Britain show slight variations in their data with Japan being the least favorable country for both male and female graduate
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, Switzerland, Britain, and Germany during 2001.

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percentage
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graduates
with about 45%
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at about 30%.

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, it is evident that Germany is leading with a
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percentage
of about 45%. The
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IELTS academic the chart below shows the percentage of males and females higer educational qualifications in 5 countries in 2001

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