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The line graph shows the number of customers in four restaurants between 1990 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph compares the variations in the number of consumers in four different restaurants from 1990 to 2015. Overall, it is evident from the chart that the number of customers for both Pizza hut and Chicken spot fell over the period. meanwhile, There was a significant increase in the number of buyers for Donut Bro and Burger Bar. It is noticeable that in 1990, Pizza hut had the most number of customers at 8000. The next highest was Chicken Spot at 6000. Consumer numbers decreased for Pizza hut over the next 25 years and lost their position to Burger Bar, however, the volume of buyers for Chicken fluctuated considerably reaching a value of merely below 3000. By contrast, after 1990, the number of customers rose significantly for Donut bro from around 2500 to 7000 buyers by the end of the time period it was the most popular restaurant. The customers for Burger bar-restaurant increased slowly reaching a value of 3500.
The line graph compares the variations in the
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of consumers in four
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different
restaurants from 1990 to 2015.
Overall
, it is evident from the chart that the
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number
of
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customers
for both
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Pizza hut
and Chicken spot fell over the period.
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meanwhile
, There was a significant increase in the
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number
of buyers for
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Donut
Bro and Burger Bar. It is noticeable that in 1990,
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Pizza hut
had the most
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number
of
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customers
at 8000. The
next
highest was Chicken Spot at 6000. Consumer
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numbers
decreased for
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Pizza hut
over the
next
25 years and lost their position to Burger Bar,
however
, the volume of buyers for Chicken fluctuated
considerably
reaching a value of
merely
below 3000. By contrast, after 1990, the
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number
of
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customers
rose
significantly
for
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Donut
bro from around 2500 to 7000 buyers by the
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end
of the time period it was the most popular restaurant. The
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customers
for Burger bar-restaurant increased
slowly
reaching a value of 3500.
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IELTS academic The line graph shows the number of customers in four restaurants between 1990 and 2015.

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