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The graph compares the average amounts of prices of housing in terms of thousand dollars

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The graph compares the average amounts of prices of housing in terms of thousand dollars which fluctuated during the six months in 2005. It can be obviously seen, the difference between price of housing sold and housing on the market was high. As it approached to the end of the year, the difference in price decreased. According to the graph, housing on the market had higher price than housing sold; about 335 versus 300 in July. For the following month, despite the housing on market declined, the housing sold slightly went up: About 328 and 303 for housing on the market and housing sold, respectively. Almost in parallel, both of them gently fell down until the middle of September. Although, there was not fluctuation in the price of housing sold, the price of housing on market promoted. finally, housing on the market was upward and the other one downward till the late year. To sum up, excluding august to October, the trend of housing on the market was downward, furthermore, housing sold was upward during the whole period.

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 of housing in terms of thousand dollars which fluctuated during the six months in 2005. It can be obviously
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, the difference between You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfarepayfeepremiumfigurevaluation
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 of the year, the difference in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfarepayfeepremiumfigurevaluation
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 than housing sold; about 335 versus 300 in July. For the following month, despite the housing on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadvertiseretaildisplay
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 declined, the housing sold slightly
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market
 and housing sold, respectively
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, housing on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadvertiseretaildisplay
market
 was upward and the other one downward till the late year.

To sum up, excluding august to October, the trend of housing on the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadvertiseretaildisplay
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 was downward, furthermore
, housing sold was upward during the whole period. 