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The table below shows the percentage participation of women in senior management in three companies between 1975 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows the percentage participation of women in senior management in three companies between 1975 and 2015. nY32
An inspection of the data in the table reveals the proportion of females taking the senior positions in three various companies over a 40-year period from 1975 to 2015. From the overall prospective, it can be clearly observed that there was a noticeable increase in the percentage of leading women in all three groups during the given period. Moreover, Eldan Ltd experienced the most significant proportion of female managers compared to other participants. To begin with, having remained unchanged in the first two years, the company of Eldan subsequently witnessed a significant increase in the share of women in major positions by 11% from 3% to 14% in 1985. While there was a steady rise in the percentage of Bamforth Ltd’s leading females by 2% every year, in a stark contrast, the proportion women workers of Finsbury Ltd declined gradually, firstly by 2% from 16% to 14% in 1980, and then by 1% in 1985. Five years later, it is noted that the percentage of females in leading position in Eldan, Bamforth, and Finsbury companies was 28%, 15% and 22% respectively. Experiencing an increase by 5% in the following year, Eldan’s proportion of women has almost doubled by the end of the period. Likewise, Bamforth saw more than two times increase in the percentage of females in major positions during the period from 1990 to 2015, whereas the share of leading women in Finsbury, having decreased by 2% in 2000, then went up to 26% 15 years later.
An inspection of the data in the table reveals the
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females
taking the senior
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in three various
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companies
over a
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40-year
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period
from 1975 to 2015.

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overall
prospective, it can be
clearly
observed that there was a noticeable
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increase
in the
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percentage
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leading
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women
in all three groups during the
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given
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period
.
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,
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Eldan
Ltd experienced the most significant
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female
managers compared to other participants.

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begin
with, having remained unchanged in the
first
two years, the
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company
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Eldan
subsequently
witnessed a significant
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women
in major
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by 11% from 3% to 14% in 1985. While there was a steady rise in the
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of
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Bamforth
Ltd’s
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leading
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females
by 2% every
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year
, in a stark contrast, the
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proportion
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women
workers of
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Finsbury
Ltd declined
gradually
,
firstly
by 2% from 16% to 14% in 1980, and then by 1% in 1985.

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is noted
that the
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females
in
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leading
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position
in
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Eldan
,
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Bamforth
, and
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Finsbury
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companies
was 28%, 15% and 22%
respectively
. Experiencing an
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year
,
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Eldan
’s
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proportion
of
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women
has almost doubled by the
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end
of the
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.
Likewise
,
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Bamforth
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more than two times
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increase
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females
in major
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during the
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from 1990 to 2015, whereas the share of
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Finsbury
, having decreased by 2% in 2000, then went up to 26% 15 years later.
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IELTS academic The table below shows the percentage participation of women in senior management in three companies between 1975 and 2015.

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