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the maps below show recent changes in the town of Kimsville. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two maps depict the main changes which have taken place in the town of Kimsville between 2002 to today. Overall, it can be seen that Kimsville in 2002 was full of trees, but today it has experienced a significant industrialization with new accommodation, transportation facilities and software company. A notable change is that a new train station has been erected adjacent to the city center on the left, which made commuting to another areas easier than in the past. Kimsville was well known as shopping center, so it has been enlarged and an ancient cinema has been replaced by a pub. Anther striking changes are the north-west and south-west of the city where used to have a group of trees, but it has been cut down to construct a new football stadium and new apartments for dwellers to live in. A final interesting development has been the replacement of old factory to software company.
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in 2002 was full of trees,
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it has experienced a significant industrialization with
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accommodation, transportation facilities and software
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company
. A notable
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change
is that a
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train station has
been erected
adjacent to the city center on the
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left
, which made commuting to another areas easier than in the past.
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Kimsville
was well known as shopping center,
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it has
been enlarged
and an ancient cinema has
been replaced
by a pub. Anther striking
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are the north-west and south-west of the city where
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used
to have a group of trees,
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it has been
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cut
down to construct a
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new
football stadium and
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new
apartments for dwellers to
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live
in. A final interesting development has been the replacement of
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factory to software
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