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The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below. You should write at least 150 words.

The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below. LrGPK
The Chart represent the summery of the survey about adult education, where in the first chart it' exhibit the reason behind their decision to study and in later the pie chart parade the peoples thinking about how the expenditure of adult education should be shared. It is clear in sight that interest in subject is the most Significant Logic behind study decision. Aspirants decide to study for gain qualification to a particular subject, also in terms of the sharing of educational expenses Individual has the major responsibility to take. Beside that Employers and taxpayers also has influence over expense sharing In the first portion we can see students give more emphasis on the interest in subject and then to gain qualification. In the other hand some decides to study Because of it's helpfulness to their current job which is number 22 percent. Meanwhile another two group of 20% people ascertain to improve prospect of promotion and enjoying their learning. Very rare amount of people about 12% choose to study so that they could be able to change job and around 9% fix to meet people. Looking at the pie chart the number of peoples thinking about how adult education, expenditure should should be shared, 40% of cost should be covered by individual where 35% carried by employer and 25% on taxpayer
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the summery of
the survey about adult education, where in the
first
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it' exhibit the reason behind their decision to
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study
and in later the

pie
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parade the
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peoples
thinking about how the expenditure of adult education should
be shared
.

It is
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clear
in sight that interest in subject is the most

Significant Logic behind
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study
decision. Aspirants decide to
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study
for gain qualification to a particular subject,
also
in terms of the sharing of educational expenses

Individual has the major responsibility to take. Beside that

Employers and taxpayers
also
has influence over expense
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sharing


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first
portion we can
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students give more emphasis

on the interest in subject and then to gain qualification. In the other hand
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some
decides to study

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Because
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of it's helpfulness
to their
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current
job which is

number 22 percent.
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Meanwhile
another two group of 20%
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people
ascertain to
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improve
prospect of promotion and enjoying their learning.
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rare amount of
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people
about 12% choose to
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study
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so
that they could be able to
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change
job and around 9%
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meet
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people
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Looking at the pie
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the number of
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peoples
thinking about how adult education,

expenditure
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should should
be shared
, 40% of cost should
be covered
by individual where 35% carried by employer and 25% on taxpayer
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IELTS academic The charts below show the results of a survey of adult education. The first chart shows the reasons why adults decide to study. The pie chart shows how people think the costs of adult education should be shared. Write a report for a university lecturer, describing the information shown below.

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5 paragraphs
220 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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