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The maps below show Newbury High School in 1980, as it is now, and the plans for its development.

The maps below show Newbury High School in 1980, as it is now, and the plans for its development. 0MV3B
The diagrams illustrate the development and the future projects of Newbury High School. In 1980, the high school was a single building. Also, a small car park and play-ground was built in front of the school building. The sports field and the park were the largest parts of the map. Since 1980, the educational institute has accomplished many projects. The sports field was reduced in size and demolished to construct the second school building and a small play-ground in southeast area. The playground in the middle, was knock downed and became an extension to the car park. For the year 2025, Newbury High School is preparing new ideas and plans to improve the students’ facilities. For instance, one of the massive modifications is the park being reduced to half to its previous size. The car park will be double the size. In the southeast, the small playground will be demolished and the second building will expand its size. Another playground will be established in front of the sports field. Overall, the academy has accomplished significant development in improving the students’ educational environment.
The diagrams illustrate the development and the future projects of Newbury High School.

In 1980, the high
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school
was a single
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building
.
Also
, a
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small
car
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park
and play-ground
was built
in front of the
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school
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building
. The sports field and the
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park
were the largest parts of the map.

Since 1980, the educational institute has accomplished
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many
projects. The sports field was
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reduced
in
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size
and demolished to construct the second
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school
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building
and a
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small
play-ground in southeast area. The
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playground
in the middle, was knock downed and became an extension to the car park.

For the year 2025, Newbury High
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School
is preparing new
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ideas
and plans to
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improve
the students’ facilities.
For instance
, one of the massive modifications is the
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park
being
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reduced
to half to its previous
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size
. The car
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park
will be double the
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size
. In the southeast, the
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small
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playground
will
be demolished
and the second
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building
will expand its
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size
. Another
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playground
will
be established
in front of the sports field.

Overall
, the academy has accomplished significant development in improving the students’ educational environment.
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