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The following pie chart compares the figure of degrees granted in four majors namely Computer Science, Medicine, Law and Business at National University in three years 1990, 2000 and 2010.

The following pie chart compares the figure of degrees granted in four majors namely Computer Science, Medicine, Law and Business at National University in three years 1990, 2000 and 2010. Dq5a6
The following pie chart compares the figure of degrees granted in four majors namely Computer Science, Medicine, Law and Business at National University in three years 1990, 2000 and 2010. As transparent from the graph, the percentages of degrees granted by Computer Science increased dramatically except for Business. Besides, Computer Science degrees granted rate were the highest of all years. The proportion of degrees granted in Computer Science in 1990 was 30% and following that the figure rose significantly to 40% and 45 % in 2000 and 2010 respectively. Business degrees granted ratio decreased from 30% to 10% in 2000 and continued to fall by 5 % in 2010. Besides, the percentage of degrees granted by Computer Science was 3 times as much as that of Business in 2010. Meanwhile, there was no major change to the degrees granted rate in remaining discipline. 25% of degrees were granted to Medicine in 1990, which upswing to 5% in 2000 and dropped again to 25% in 2010. The number of degrees granted by Law stayed stable at 15% in 2010 despite a 5% decline in 2000.
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, Medicine, Law and
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at National University in three years 1990, 2000 and 2010.

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by Computer
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increased
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rate were the highest of all years.

The proportion of
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in Computer
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in 1990 was 30% and following that the figure rose
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to 40% and 45 % in 2000 and 2010
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Business
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ratio decreased from 30% to 10% in 2000 and continued to fall by 5 % in 2010.
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by Computer
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was 3 times as much as that of
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in 2010.

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rate in remaining discipline. 25% of
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to Medicine in 1990, which upswing to 5% in 2000 and dropped again to 25% in 2010. The number of
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by Law stayed stable at 15% in 2010 despite a 5% decline in 2000.
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