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the maps below show Hunderstone town at present and a proposed plan for it

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A glance at the 2 maps reveal the plan of Hunderstone town in the precent and its supposed plan. It is apparent from the information that there are some significant changes of the town. The most concern point is the air field is replaced by a industrial estate and a new path which will connected A2 road and town center. In the precent plan, in the northern of town, there are a air field is connected by a small road to A2 road. The A2 is the main road of Hunderstone town, in the western of town and leads to some special point in the town. The roundabout located in the middle of A2, from there, the local citizens can go to the gas station beside the railway in the center of town, and also the town center in the eastern of town. In the future, the local residents propose to be see some extreme change of town. The air field will be taken down, and the Industrial estate will be replaced it. There are also a new path which leads to railway from Industrial estate. A brand new road namely A4 will be built in the future that supposed to connected the main road A2 and town center. In the center of railway, there will be have a new roundabout in place of the conjuntion, that will be increase the safety for people
A glance at the 2 maps reveal the plan of
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Hunderstone
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town
in the
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precent
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significant
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. The most concern point is the air field
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a
industrial estate and a
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new
path which will connected A2
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and
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center.

In the
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plan, in the northern of
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, there are
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a
air
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field
is connected
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to A2
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. The A2 is the main
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of
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Hunderstone
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, in the western of
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and leads to
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. The roundabout located in the middle of A2, from there, the local citizens can go to the gas station beside the railway in the center of
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path which leads to railway from Industrial estate. A brand
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A2 and
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, that will be increase the safety for
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